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This is a Nestle ad launched in 2017 to celebrate mexican Mother's Day. The first shot shows a mother with her child sitting in a kitchen table, it seems they are doing some homework. Then it is shown a close up to the computer they are using and it is revealed that they are learning the mexican sign language alphabet. You assume the kid is deaf.
Later on, the mother lays the child down for him to sleep and they say to each other ‘I love you’ in signs. Until that moment, not a single word has been said. The next day the mother is preparing a suitcase for her son, meanwhile he is in front of a mirror repeating the signs he had already learned. They arrive to a swimming pool full of children and their mothers, they sit down on a bench and she helps him to get ready for his lesson. The next thing we see is the mother doing a thumbs up, he breathes deeply and walks towards another child. He taps the shoulder of this new boy and when he turns around, you can realise he is actually the deaf child.
They start a conversation, they introduce each other in sign language.
After we see the hearing boy (named Tono) shouting to his mom that his new friend Lalo understood. On the other hand , Lalo, the deaf child, asks his mom if she had seen that. She answers to him saying he made a new friend.
The last scene we see is Lalo’s mother thanking Tono’s mother for that incredible gesture.
The ad finishes with the two boys playing in the pool and it is shown the phrase “You know you are doing it right, when your child makes a better world.”
Mexico is not an educated country in a lot of matters, particularly on inclusion subjects. This ad reflects how easily would be the life for people with disabilities if we were taught since little to respect and embrace the differences. Mexican sign language is really unknown, there are only 60 certified mexican traductors of sign language. It is really hard for the deaf community to communicate with others because they are taught differently from hearing people and not everyone knows now that each sign language is considered an idiom.
So, the ad is saying education matters, what you are taught from a young age is what you are going to become as a grown up. It recognises the hard labour of mothers setting and example and educating their children.
I think it is an amazing ad, it is really well segmented because the mothers are the ones that usually do the shopping and choose the products for their children. Shows the importance of education and inclusion in societies, and recognises the value and the importance of the mother figure in a child's life.
Read the corrections carefully. Try to think about the rules that these corrections reveal.
In particular, compare these two sentences very carefully:
This ad reflects how easily would be the life for people with disabilities if we were taught since little to respect and embrace the differences.
This ad reflects how much easier life for people with disabilities would be if we were taught from early on to respect and embrace differences.
This is a Nestle ad launched in 2017 to celebrate Mexican Mother's Day. The first shot shows a mother with her child sitting at a kitchen table. It seems they are doing some homework, but then there is a close up of the computer they are using, and it is revealed that they are learning the Mexican sign language alphabet. You begin to realise the kid is deaf.
Later on, the mother is settling the child down to sleep and they say to each other ‘I love you’ in signs. Up until that moment, not a single word has been spoken. The next day the mother is preparing a suitcase for her son. Meanwhile he is in front of a mirror repeating the signs he had already learned. They arrive at a swimming pool full of children and their mothers, they sit down on a bench and she helps him to get ready for his swimming lesson. The next thing we see is the mother doing a thumbs up. He breathes deeply and walks towards another child. He pats the shoulder of this new boy who turns around, and you realise the other boy is deaf too.
They start a conversation, and introduce themselves in sign language.
After that we see the deaf boy (named Tono) shouting to his mom that his new friend Lalo has understood. Meanwhile, Lalo, the other deaf child, asks his mom if she had seen that. She answers him by saying he made a new friend.
The last scene we see is Lalo’s mother thanking Tono’s mother for that incredible gesture.
The ad finishes with the two boys playing in the pool and the phrase “You know you are doing it right, when your child makes a better world” is shown.
Mexico is not an educated country in a lot of respects, particularly on subjects around inclusion. This ad reflects how much easier life for people with disabilities would be if we were taught from early on to respect and embrace differences. Mexican sign language is relatively unknown; there are only 60 certified mexican instructors of sign language. It is really hard for the deaf community to communicate with others because they are taught differently from hearing people and not everyone knows now that each sign language (French, Spanish, English etc) is considered linguistically distinct.
The ad is emphasising how education matters, and how what you are taught from a young age is what you are going to become as a grown up. It recognises the hard work of mothers (parents?) in setting and example and educating their children.
I think it is an amazing ad. It is really well targeted because the mothers are the ones that usually do the shopping and choose the products for their children. Above all, it shows the importance of education and inclusion in society, and recognises the value and the importance of the mother figure in a child's life.
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