(Intermediate student writing) The highest place I've ever been

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The highest place i´ve ever been:

The highest place i´ve ever been is also the coldest, this beautiful place is located in "Los Andes" mountains, only two shorts hours away from Santiago. This rocky mountain is named "El Plomo" and is 4.500 meters hight, full of snow almost the entire year. You can go to the top only doing hiking, but you have to be trained because is a really hard and sometimes too steep road, also you have to consider that you`ll need a heavy equipment to camp, because it takes almost 10 hours to get to the top. Anyway, it is a wonderful experience, you´ll find a terrific white views of the mountains and a calm place to connect with nature and yourself.

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The Highest Place I've Ever Been:

The highest place I've ever been is also the coldest. This beautiful place is located in "Los Andes" mountains, only two shorts hours from Santiago. This rocky mountain is named "El Plomo" and is 4.500 meters high and covered in snow almost the entire year. You can only get to the top by hiking, and you have to be trained because it is a really hard and sometimes extremely steep track. Also, you have to remember that you`ll need to carry heavy equipment for camping, because it takes almost 10 hours to get to the top. Anyway, it is a wonderful experience; you´ll find terrific views of the white mountains and a calm place to connect with nature and yourself.

By Maximo