- Spiritual
- Social
- Moral
- Emotional
- Intellectual
- Physical
· __________ courage – Feeling fear yet choosing to act, especially at the risk of bodily harm or death.
· _________ courage – Facing rejection, criticism, or ridicule from others, and expressing one’s true self.
· _________ courage – Standing up for one’s beliefs in the face of overwhelming opposition, and acting ethically and responsibly.
· _________ courage – Following one’s heart, being vulnerable and authentic, and coping with distress and adversity.
· _________ courage – Challenging old assumptions and understandings, seeking new knowledge and insights, and acting on them.
· _________ courage – Exploring one’s purpose and meaning in life, and connecting with a higher power or a greater cause.
- Spiritual
Aims:
Looking closely at personal student writing. Improving personal writing.
Looking closely at punctuation and how it can produce greater impact.
Learning how to showcase your knowledge of English in a piece of writing.
Learn to use adjectives imaginatively and effectively.
Adding a personal tone to you're writing.
Roller coasters - by Belén
“Always go with the choice that scares you the most, because
that's the one that is going to require the most from you.”
- Caroline Myss*
Discuss the quote
1. In what ways has this been true
in your own life?
2. In what ways is this true in
learning a foreign language?
3. Is it always true? Should you “always
go with the choice that scares you most”?
4. Do you have any irrational
fears – such as a fear of roller coasters? Flying? Cockroaches?
Rollercoasters
A risky situation I've been in? I couldn't think of any at first. My life is
kind of boring, I guess. In every opportunity I get, I prefer to play it
safe rather than explore the unknown. After an exhaustive search,
the only thing that crossed my mind was when I overcame one of my
biggest fears — rollercoasters.
As an asthma sufferer, I was scared of having an asthma attack while
riding a roller coaster. The chances were small, but still I
wasn't quite sure about it. The opportunity to ride one of these giant
monsters came when I visited the Universal Studios theme park
almost three years ago.
I had promised myself I wouldn't ride anything with the
label "life-threatening" (a label that I made up, of course) but there
I was, waiting in the line to ride 'The Incredible Hulk Coaster'. I still
don't know how I ended up there, to be honest. After what it seemed like an
hour, we reached the top before the ride really starts: a place where the train stops
for 3 seconds.
A perfect opportunity to regret all your life choices that had led you
to that one, I may add.
Discuss the bold and underlined bits with your partner.
Last section - how has Belén used punctuation and
paragraphing for impact?
But then, during the one-minute ride, nothing happened. No asthma attack. No
messed-up lungs. I survived that.
And I have to say that I loved it. Thanks to that I now have a love for rollercoasters
and I'm willing to try bungy jumping while I'm here in New Zealand.
Sometimes it's best to be a little adventurous in life. You never know what
comes afterwards.
- Belén Machado
Reread the text: can you recall what adjectives were used?
A _____ situation I've been in? I couldn't think of any at first - my life is
kind of _____ I guess. In every opportunity I get, I prefer to play it safe
rather than explore the unknown. After an ______ search the only thing that
came to mind was when I overcame one of my biggest fears: roller coasters.
As an asthma sufferer, I was scared of having an asthma attack while riding a
rollercoaster. The chances were ____, but still I wasn't quite sure
about it. The opportunity to ride one of these ____ monsters came
when I visited the Universal Studios theme park almost three years
ago.
I had promised myself I wouldn't ride anything with the label
"___-_______" (a label that I made up, of
course) but there I was, waiting in the line to ride 'The Incredible
Hulk Coaster'. I still don't know how I ended up there, to be
_____. After what seemed like an hour, we reached the top before
the ride really started: a place where the train stops for three seconds.
A ______ opportunity to regret all your life choices that had led you
to that one, I may add.
But then, during the one minute ride, nothing happened. No asthma attack. No
______ lungs. I’d survived. And I have to say that I loved it. Thanks to that I
now have a love for roller coasters and I'm ______ to try bungy jumping while
I'm here in New Zealand.
Sometimes it's best to be a little ________ in life. You never know
what comes afterwards.
What alternative adjectives could have been used?
What do these have in common?
I guess
As an asthma sufferer
I may add
And I have to say
What do they add to the text?
Useful language:
Lime Biting - by Selina
I'm grateful for all these experiences which I was allowed to make,
Even for the bad ones, which I take
When I look back to these memories
I've got a smile on my face
Thank you for all travels, excursions, memories my friends
It was a great race
Now the race is finished for me and also for a few of you
Enjoy one last time the Sky Tower's view
Not wonder yourselves - What would? Which is? What could be next?
Remember you are the writer of your personal text
Nobody likes goodbyes
Parting is basking clear
My personal advice is, c'mon guys drink one last beer
Please don't be sad to leave, be happy about what you had,
No one can take this from you, so smile, don't be sad
I am sooooo thankful to all you for this beautiful time
To say goodbye is like biting in a lime
Safe travels everyone, good luck whatever you are going to do,
Okay okay enough - one last thing:
I'll always remember you
- Selina

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