Saturday, December 2, 2023

Bill Bryson travel writing








These words have been taken from the text. Where are we?




snow-whitened landscape        Mists and fog      $5 admission     snow     road    
silent        visitors' center            lookout point        woods         slippery     






Here are some more...

a platform of rocks            grey soup            theater curtains                a thousand feet     
Empire State Building           an old shoelace


4/6 of these are metaphors or analogies for describing natural phenomena. Which are they and what do you guess they are describing?










Read the excerpt and decide the best title: Don't worry about the gaps yet.


The Grand Canyon in Winter

A Magical Experience

A Mighty Hole

10 miles across, a mile deep, 180 miles long



I drove through a snow-whitened landscape toward the Grand Canyon. It was hard to believe that this was the last week of April. Mists and fog swirled about the road. I could see nothing at the sides and ahead of me except the occasional white smear of oncoming headlights. By the time I reached the entrance to Grand Canyon National Park, and paid the $5 admission, snow was dropping ______ again, thick white flakes so big that their undersides carried shadows.

The road through the park followed the southern lip of the canyon for 30 miles. Two or three times I stopped in turnouts and went to the edge to peer________ into the silent murk, knowing that the canyon was out there, just beyond my nose, but I couldn't see anything. The fog was everywhere - threaded among the trees, adrift on the roadsides, rising _______ off the pavement. It was so thick I could kick holes in it.

Afterwards, I trudged toward the visitors' center, perhaps 200 yards away, but before I got there I came across a snow-spattered sign announcing a lookout point half a mile away along a trail through the woods, and ________ I went down it, mostly just to get some air.

The path was slippery and took a long time to traverse, but on the way the snow stopped falling and the air felt clean and refreshing_______ I came to a platform of rocks, marking the edge of the canyon. There was no fence to keep you back from the edge, so I shuffled _________ over and looked down, but could see nothing but grey soup.

A middle-aged couple came along and as we stood chatting about what a dispiriting experience this was, a miraculous thing happened. The fog parted. It just _______ drew back, like a set of theater curtains being opened, and _________ we saw that we were on the edge of a sheer, giddying drop of at least a thousand feet.

The scale of the Grand Canyon is almost beyond comprehension. It is 10 miles across, a mile deep, 180 miles long. You could set the Empire State Building down in it and still be thousands of feet above it. Indeed, you could set the whole of Manhattan down inside it and you would still be so high above it that buses would be like ants and people would be invisible, and not a sound would reach you.

The thing that gets you - that gets everyone - is the silence. The Grand Canyon just swallows sound. The sense of space and emptiness is overwhelming. Nothing happens out there. Down below you on the canyon floor, far, far away, is the thing that carved it: the Colorado River. It is 300 feet wide, but from the canyon's lip it looks thin and insignificant. It looks like an old shoelace. Everything is dwarfed by this mighty hole.

Try to put the adverbs into the gaps:

silently
eventually
steamily
hopefully
heavily
suddenly
impulsively
cautiously



Make a gesture that shows the meaning of each of these verbs:
Swirl about
dropping heavily
followed
peer hopefully
threaded among
rising steamily
kick holes in
announcing
trudged toward
traverse
marking
shuffled cautiously over
parted
silently drew back
set down
reach
carve
dwarfed








The writer uses many analogies. How many can you find? Why does he use them?




Really bad analogies written by high school students.
Image result for really bad analogies


Think of good analogies for the following things:

A person with a bad hangover
The sound of drumming
A beautiful voice
An embarrassed person
A busy airport
A dishonest politician
A sad defeated old man
An arrogant young man




Cloze

I drove (1)______ a snow-whitened landscape toward the Grand Canyon. It was hard to (2)______ that this was the last week of April. Mists and fog swirled about the road. I could see (3)______ at the sides and ahead of me except the occasional white smear of oncoming headlights. By the time I (3)_______ the entrance to Grand Canyon National Park, and paid the $5 admission, snow was dropping heavily again, thick white flakes (4)___ big that their undersides carried shadows.

The road through the park (5)_______ the southern lip of the canyon for 30 miles. Two or three times I stopped in turnouts and went to the edge to (6)____ hopefully into the silent murk, knowing that the canyon was out there, just (7)______ my nose, but I couldn't see anything. The fog was everywhere - threaded (8)_______ the trees, adrift on the roadsides, rising steamily off the pavement. It was so thick I (9)_____ kick holes in it.

Afterwards, I trudged (10)______ the visitors' center, perhaps 200 yards away, but before I got there I came (11)_____ a snow-spattered sign announcing a lookout point half a mile away along a trail through the woods, and impulsively I went down it, mostly just to (12)___ some air.

The path was slippery and took a long time to traverse, but (13)___ the way the snow stopped falling and the air (14)____ clean and refreshing. Eventually I came to a platform of rocks, marking the edge of the canyon. There was no fence to (15)____ you back from the edge, so I shuffled cautiously over and looked down, but could see nothing (16)___ grey soup.





Milford Sound

Read Martin's text - in what way has Bill Bryson's writing style influenced Martin's?